Distortion~

May 9, 2006, 4:17 pm

~DISTORTION~ She was sweet sixteen,paper thin, mommasenvy and every girl's goalwith secrets hidden behinda Karen Carpenter smile.She could have anyonebelieving the sun wasshining on her and...

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Re: Distortion~

May 10, 2006, 9:17 am

A powerful piece. About something that's all to common these days. Very good work... Oh, and I do hope this wasn't about someone you know.

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Re: Distortion~

May 11, 2006, 3:13 pm

this piece really resonated with me. especially this stanza:"She was sweet sixteen,paper thin, mommasenvy and every girl's goalwith secrets hidden behinda Karen Carpenter smile."beautiful...

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Re: Distortion~

May 11, 2006, 3:42 pm

*nods* that's my favorite stanza as well. Very nice piece Moon Silent

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You took a topic and used a single word to great effect to describe how a person sees themselves through a false lens of mind. Very good job in presenting on a topic that is very hard to understand,...

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Re: Distortion~

May 21, 2006, 8:04 am

Thanks so much Stargazer, nope not anyone I know

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Re: Distortion~

May 21, 2006, 8:05 am

Thanks so much Cry Glad it touched you.

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Re: Distortion~

May 21, 2006, 8:07 am

Thank you Silent

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Re: Distortion~

May 21, 2006, 8:09 am

Thank you Blake, glad you like

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Re: Distortion~

June 8, 2006, 4:28 pm

A terrible, and wasteful, disease...the reference to Karen Carpenter is apt; a great talent taken too soon...who knows how many others have gone this way...what gifts they could have brought to the...

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Re: Distortion~

June 19, 2006, 9:04 pm

Thank you Soul

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